Pacing...

AkiAo July 25, 2024 8:32 pm

I've been reading for months now, the pacing has been okay and the story/lore was..meh. Then it rushes past the ending, with barely anything showing or explaining how the demon was defeated? And the fairytale happy ending? I'm a little disappointed cause this story could have been very good with just a little bit more effort

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