Character deterioration

allydied July 25, 2024 10:52 am

Why has the FL’s character deteriorated so much in the last few chapters? She was characterized as very intelligent and resourceful in the first half when collecting evidence and scheming behind her ex-fiancé’s back, but perfect character syndrome kicked in where everyone just adores her, and she became so one dimensional that it was quite hard to bear. In the second half, instead of showing how intelligent she is, the author decided to just tell us by having her exclaim “you’re gonna pay me for this!”. there was 0 romantic tension or build up to show us exactly why she also loved the prince instead of it just being a partnership. it feels super rushed, the art has also gotten worse by the end. this story deserved a better second half.

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