my 2 cents

rxmad July 25, 2024 3:33 am

imma go ahead and be honest... the story setting is a wreck. we don't always get FL's monologue so it's hard to pin on what she plans on doing or what's gonna happen next.

this might be harsh but the artist (or author maybe) doesn't know how to gradually transition into the next scene or day and it can be quite confusing to keep up with the plot at times.

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