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Oh wow i read this before but now i don't really have any memories of how the story goes but i just remember it has some memory loss and plot twist and i thought it was so good for some reason
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Oh wow i read this before but now i don't really have any memories of how the story goes but i just remember it has some memory loss and plot twist and i thought it was so good for some reason
After re-reading this after so many years… the whole plot and character development seemed so rushed and…terribly executed???
There seems to be no real “character” in everyone…and the fact that the MC literally just doesn’t seem to care about anything and everything he’s done and built up??
And just…I want to emphasise how rushed it really feels….from the dialogue to the feelings and misunderstandings between the characters. Even the second “couple” only really had a few panels together and that’s about it…
The whole thing just seemed to feel really empty? I didn’t feel a single thing ???
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