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Girl that’s the plot we’re going to get those answers as it unfolds
I hope so! Because it currently feels like those answers weren't going to be addressed.
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Girl that’s the plot we’re going to get those answers as it unfolds
I hope so! Because it currently feels like those answers weren't going to be addressed.
it's not bad, but there's a few things I wish were explained and actions that I wish would give the story more substance.
Like where did her sister go? Is the temple looking for her? Did they just not care because they have the other sister to replace her?