But their relationship to me feels forced. Theh don’t know each other. The other guy and him (even tho he’s a dick) have more history and love for each other that’s jsut kinda left hanging. I feel like the author could tell and quickly made him disappear for 10 chapters and filled it with jsut sex between mc and ml1..I mean it worked but now it’s jsut lost plot. And yeah it would’ve broken him to do that but it would have aloud for more logical character development..uke jsut went from MASTER KILLER DOMINATOR to pussy…too quick. Personally it would’ve made sense if he kinda of got cold again and killed off the baby and asserted dominance only to learn more about the mc1’s past and get swooned and somehow give an actual reason for ml2 to be hated (give him more lore) and then have mc1 find out who his dad is and ruthlessly take over the company and THEN empreg uke again but now it’s a happy logical ending
im not going to disagree with you that the romance aspect of their relationship was rushed. but i actually think the mc had a really nice character development. initially, he became this harsh dominant person because he didnt have a choice and he thought it was what he needed to do to get back to his alpha- and he lost his entire identity as an omega.
and then yk he finally got there he realised that alpha wasnt worth it and he was kinda directionless for a while. and then he surpsingly met this other alpha who ended up creating a safe space for him and bringing back parts of him he thought he has lost.
i do think their relationship has a lot of room to develop tho, and i think it will! mc still has lots of walls and barriers up which probably lends to the relationship fewling forced. but i think that aspect of their dynamic will be explored.
also, personally, i think intentionally poisoning the mc to forcibly abort their child against his will is plenty of "actual" reason to hate the second male lead lol
also, the mc /wanted/ to be an omega and that was taken from him, so him jumping and latching on to the first opportunity to have that back makes perfect sense!
Yeah I agree that it does give hella reasons to hate but somehow not disillusioned from they’re relationship esp after he was « forced » bc of his family…like hellllooo twisted plot(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ!! But that’s just preference lol. And I also agree that he had decent character development but just from writers perspective it could’ve been advanced. Like for someone who lost his entire omega identity, didn’t take more then 10 chapters for his act to stop….but yeah I get it
Ehhh honestly baby plot came in too quick. They should’ve developed a stronger relationship and deal with ex trauma and learn about who his dad was. Even like a natural mis carriage or if he took the pill secretly would’ve been better plot wise but oh well ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭