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*Shocking news* people have spiritual beliefs even in "reality" crazy right?
Has nothing to do with spiritual beliefs. My issue was that it was thrown in there completely random, without so much as mentioning it. And all in all it is a simple mismatch for the baseplot that this story is about.
They entirely lost me with bringing that chi stuff in.
As a sports rival comic I'd have read this, but not by bringing in magical powers and shit. It feels SO out of place and shoe-horned. Not to mention needless if you already have the sports aspect that could have been focused on. Especially since you don't need magic powers to shoot a fucking gun. So yeah, weird choice. And really not my thing. :/