i like the plot and the concept, however there are still some parts lacking. 1- Baron’s death did not felt real to me because of how nonchalant the characters reactions/feelings towards his death. It just seemed like it was just a small misfortune that happened, no funeral scene whatsoever
2- What happened to Robert? does he still have some obsession towards MC after coming back from his internship? why is he obsessed with MC? his character doesnt seem relevant to the story imo
3- what happened afterwards? i wanna see the MC and kisters relationship progression huhuhu
i like the plot and the concept, however there are still some parts lacking.
1- Baron’s death did not felt real to me because of how nonchalant the characters reactions/feelings towards his death. It just seemed like it was just a small misfortune that happened, no funeral scene whatsoever
2- What happened to Robert? does he still have some obsession towards MC after coming back from his internship? why is he obsessed with MC? his character doesnt seem relevant to the story imo
3- what happened afterwards? i wanna see the MC and kisters relationship progression huhuhu