Hmmm the premise and points are good, but the execution, pacing, and direction are lacking. It would've been good if it's longer, the pacing is a little slower, minimal sexual encounter, and focused on how petty and angry the ML then the slow unfolding of the backstory. It's like everything is all over the place hahaha. Idk
Hmmm the premise and points are good, but the execution, pacing, and direction are lacking. It would've been good if it's longer, the pacing is a little slower, minimal sexual encounter, and focused on how petty and angry the ML then the slow unfolding of the backstory. It's like everything is all over the place hahaha. Idk