Not because it's short, I read a lot of good short story but this one, the seme is too much suspicious.... A bit manipulative I would say, u heard someone u like literally jerk off while saying your name, rather than just confront them about it ("so quick question, do u just lust over me or do u like me?" Lol) he go the loooooooong way round..... It can be look as a "cute tease" but it's only a cute tease if both party are on the same page (already in a relationship or at least know they have the same feeling) this is just a bit much.....
Not because it's short, I read a lot of good short story but this one, the seme is too much suspicious.... A bit manipulative I would say, u heard someone u like literally jerk off while saying your name, rather than just confront them about it ("so quick question, do u just lust over me or do u like me?" Lol) he go the loooooooong way round..... It can be look as a "cute tease" but it's only a cute tease if both party are on the same page (already in a relationship or at least know they have the same feeling) this is just a bit much.....