Is this good? And if not can u explain why without spoiling?

Depending on your taste of plot. This story goes from love to obsession to world terrorism to memory loss to i will never let you go again.

I don’t mind obsessive/possessive semes so that’s not an issue for me but are the characters annoying? By annoying I mean do they act childish and lack communication? I hate forced misunderstanding arcs which can easily be solved

Annoyingly lacking of communication like bro they have no communication at all. They tried to communicate but like they are being stubborn thinking that this is what the other thinks this is what the other means to do. It is was only solved when the world was about to end because the seme tried to kill himself. Like literally at the end of the story, it was solved but then they started to regret and became obsessed with one another again.