Baby's First Omegaverse

ChipzWithAZ July 23, 2024 11:25 pm

It's a no from me. The story elements are rushed, if not non-existent. The tropes are tired af. I clicked on it, because I was hoping it'd be a no-nonsense, bad-ass omega in charge, but instead we have:
First chapter: rape
Second chapter: "I didn't know he could make expressions like that" You just met this man yesterday -_-
Third chapter: Already nesting for his abuser

Like, for someone who is just getting into omegaverse stories, this is probably amazing. But I could search "omegaverse" and find no less than 20 stories with these exact same story beats...within the first three result pages. Smut's good tho

Responses
    Slvhs July 24, 2024 9:42 pm

    stockholm At its finest

    non July 27, 2024 5:16 am

    Wait if this is really your first omega verse, there's a billion others that are much better than this

    ChipzWithAZ July 27, 2024 2:11 pm
    Wait if this is really your first omega verse, there's a billion others that are much better than this non

    I appreciate your concern, but I'm gonna politely ask you to read my comment again

    non July 28, 2024 6:05 am
    I appreciate your concern, but I'm gonna politely ask you to read my comment again ChipzWithAZ

    ah my bad, I read it as you were 'someone who is getting into omegaverse.' The rest of your comments makes more sense now.