If you really like this story, I would not recommend reading this comment.(〜￣△￣)〜
Imma need everyone to just back to like the first 7 chapter. Honestly I just read the first 7 chapters, i physically could not stand this story. I skipped ahead to the last chapter and I’m confused,
how in the world did he end up with his childhood crush yeah I get that it’s his childhood crush and like he’s the male lead and he’s supposed to end up with him, but it doesn’t make any sense to me, but obviously he can’t end up with Paul ig.
if you look at the first seven chapters just The first seven chapters, it’s literally like a preview to how bad the story is gonna turn up to be. like are we not gonna talk about the fact that the beginning is so terribly put together like what are you actually supposed to expect from the story literally in the first seven chapters, they give us brief glimpses into the main characters past, which that’s pretty normal, sure but then like literally not even the next chapter. They show that his childhood best friend is alive. That was extremely underwhelming. I was honestly a bit confused. I didn’t really have much of reaction I was just like oh, oh so he’s alive…okay. that’s how underwhelming it was and they don’t even finish telling us the backstory, they’re like mid backstory and then they revealed that he still alive, like I feel like you should at least finish the backstory.
Also, I feel like the fact that he was alive this whole time should’ve been brought up later on, there’s 60 something chapters (of course I did not read all of them because I could not physically continue reading from chapter 7. It was getting me angry), but I really feel like the fact that he was still alive could’ve been prolonged and revealed not just to the main character, but to us too because it would’ve built up tension or something, but that was extremely underwhelming.
I don’t know how good the story might be from chapter 7 onwards, I don’t care to find out either, but I did skip to the end like I mentioned previously and the end was also underwhelming because why in the last chapter are you trying to get in Gabriel‘s pants. I feel like that’s not a way to end a series. I don’t know how everyone else felt about this story, but I could kind of tell how the story was gonna go from like the first seven chapters which I kind of regret reading, not even gonna lie to you guys, and also looking at the pictures that are shown underneath the story.
I saw someone mention how this story had a lot of plot holes, but just from what I could see I would agree and also I saw another person mention how it had potential. It really did. This could’ve been a really good story they could’ve built up suspension. I feel like the way they did the beginning was really bad honestly that’s just my personal opinion and yall disagree. I don’t care.
But honestly, if you’re wanting to read this story, I wouldn’t personally recommend it. I mean, unless you like stories like this the whole vampire or werewolf trope and they end up with a childhood friend whom they thought was dead, but me personally I’m gonna stay away from this in particular.
just did not like it That much. My Rating for the story is like a 4/10 if even that, but again, if you guys like this, then go ahead read it, but if you guys don’t like this, then don’t read it. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
If you really like this story, I would not recommend reading this comment.(〜￣△￣)〜
Imma need everyone to just back to like the first 7 chapter. Honestly I just read the first 7 chapters, i physically could not stand this story. I skipped ahead to the last chapter and I’m confused,
how in the world did he end up with his childhood crush yeah I get that it’s his childhood crush and like he’s the male lead and he’s supposed to end up with him, but it doesn’t make any sense to me, but obviously he can’t end up with Paul ig.
if you look at the first seven chapters just The first seven chapters, it’s literally like a preview to how bad the story is gonna turn up to be. like are we not gonna talk about the fact that the beginning is so terribly put together like what are you actually supposed to expect from the story literally in the first seven chapters, they give us brief glimpses into the main characters past, which that’s pretty normal, sure but then like literally not even the next chapter. They show that his childhood best friend is alive. That was extremely underwhelming. I was honestly a bit confused. I didn’t really have much of reaction I was just like oh, oh so he’s alive…okay. that’s how underwhelming it was and they don’t even finish telling us the backstory, they’re like mid backstory and then they revealed that he still alive, like I feel like you should at least finish the backstory.
Also, I feel like the fact that he was alive this whole time should’ve been brought up later on, there’s 60 something chapters (of course I did not read all of them because I could not physically continue reading from chapter 7. It was getting me angry), but I really feel like the fact that he was still alive could’ve been prolonged and revealed not just to the main character, but to us too because it would’ve built up tension or something, but that was extremely underwhelming.
I don’t know how good the story might be from chapter 7 onwards, I don’t care to find out either, but I did skip to the end like I mentioned previously and the end was also underwhelming because why in the last chapter are you trying to get in Gabriel‘s pants. I feel like that’s not a way to end a series. I don’t know how everyone else felt about this story, but I could kind of tell how the story was gonna go from like the first seven chapters which I kind of regret reading, not even gonna lie to you guys, and also looking at the pictures that are shown underneath the story.
I saw someone mention how this story had a lot of plot holes, but just from what I could see I would agree and also I saw another person mention how it had potential. It really did. This could’ve been a really good story they could’ve built up suspension. I feel like the way they did the beginning was really bad honestly that’s just my personal opinion and yall disagree. I don’t care.
But honestly, if you’re wanting to read this story, I wouldn’t personally recommend it. I mean, unless you like stories like this the whole vampire or werewolf trope and they end up with a childhood friend whom they thought was dead, but me personally I’m gonna stay away from this in particular.
just did not like it That much. My Rating for the story is like a 4/10 if even that, but again, if you guys like this, then go ahead read it, but if you guys don’t like this, then don’t read it. ╮(￣▽￣)╭