Just a poem based off of jeremy

Animeluver July 20, 2024 11:41 pm

Idky but this made me want to write a poem based on Jeremy's mind. It's not a good one could use some revising but oh well.

All I hear are cracks
My mind slipping between the cracks of time
When I try to escape
It all rewinds
The beauty you see has dulled and lost its shine
When all I hear are cracks
My voice an audible weep
My eyes losing sight and losing sleep
Because all I hear are cracks
The wall is now thin
Thin as the lifeline I've been balancing on within
I grow wings and try to fly but alas
I'm only human
A human who's head has gone to the deep end
Running from the shapeless shadows, all too familiar with my deepness
Swallowing me whole
Now, what was taught to me
Now, all I know are cracks

Responses
    Chiaki August 19, 2024 2:44 am

    That was beautiful!
    I don't know if this was intended but I thought of the panel where Jeremy stands in front of the wall that breaks down with his corpse falling out.

    Animeluver October 28, 2024 1:25 pm
    That was beautiful! I don't know if this was intended but I thought of the panel where Jeremy stands in front of the wall that breaks down with his corpse falling out. Chiaki

    Thank you it was mostly based off of that scene