Dominick being sidelined because he’s not romantic interest even tho he was always there for Mel and is like a brother to her is an ick to me, author keeps sending him to random missions just so ML can get closer to MC and I don’t hate ML but it’s still frustrating… platonic relationships aren’t less important than romantic.
Also, ML is incredibly handsome but his personality wasn’t really shown… feels more like a pretty face. he kinda just tags along and helps MC without us seeing much of his own life, heck I don’t even know a thing about his family in these 80 chapters beside that he practically raised Henry…
The plot is way too stretched out as well imo, all these inventions were cool parts but it’s like author can’t decide if this is romance or revenge story because it’s not blended in with each other and instead feels like odd mix. Would give it 7/10 but last 30 or so chapters I was looking forward to the end
Dominick being sidelined because he’s not romantic interest even tho he was always there for Mel and is like a brother to her is an ick to me, author keeps sending him to random missions just so ML can get closer to MC and I don’t hate ML but it’s still frustrating… platonic relationships aren’t less important than romantic.
Also, ML is incredibly handsome but his personality wasn’t really shown… feels more like a pretty face. he kinda just tags along and helps MC without us seeing much of his own life, heck I don’t even know a thing about his family in these 80 chapters beside that he practically raised Henry…
The plot is way too stretched out as well imo, all these inventions were cool parts but it’s like author can’t decide if this is romance or revenge story because it’s not blended in with each other and instead feels like odd mix. Would give it 7/10 but last 30 or so chapters I was looking forward to the end