Even though I love this story, I do agree the ending is rushed

Ur_bisexual_bi*ch July 19, 2024 9:42 am

The plot was definitely what attracted me to the story in the first place. The characters were complicated and flawed and yet they were mature enough to realise that.

Some said that story was complicated, but it was not imo. The plot has actually been really simple, it's just two damaged people healing each other, even though the means is a bit unusual. The story wasn't like most, and it doesn't show the entire journey of the characters, but more so the journey of them both recovering from past trauma and moving on. That's the entire plot. The timeframe is set in just a small frame of a few months, but it does show segments of the past to explain their present actions

However while the ending makes sense, it doesn't seem right. The ending feels like an ending of the scene instead of the end of an entire story. While it does end with the resolution of the problems the MCs were plagued with, it doesn't show us the future, which makes it feel abrupt. It's like they gave us a conclusion that would satisfy you in the present, however it will still keep you slightly anxious about how the future will work out, given the fact they're still highly complex people, despite having their burning problems solved.

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    Athena82 July 23, 2024 11:14 am

    The ending was definitely rushed!