Don’t piss me off

iipockyii July 18, 2024 6:41 am

God I’m hoping a meteorite comes and strikes this entire complex. I have a personal vendetta with one dimensional characters like the male lead, evil for the sake of being evil. Like seriously, he’s so comically flat as a character I roll my eyes everytime he opens his mouth. I find the MC and the brown haired kid to be much more interesting and I think the story could’ve been better if they were the main couple. But yeah this story is clearly written as sort of shock value. I find that the author struggles to actually grasp the themes they wanna display. It’s aesthetic over substance, the story is clearly made to be a horror/psychological but the writing and characters are so medicore that it’s impossible to actually take any of this shit seriously.

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    DONTFUCKINGSLEEP July 18, 2024 7:27 am

    This perfectly formulated what my thoughts were, in short this ATE