Could have used a good editing

Could have used a good editing
StrongFemaleLead July 18, 2024 5:06 am

There were huge redundancies. The story of the fire over and over. The pace was weird. Really slow at first then it went very fast. Good story. Just could have used some tweaks.

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Could have used a good editing
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