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F-22 July 17, 2024 11:50 am

really wanted to like this coz of the plot but the writing feels immaturish..

the dialogue feels really off. while the character design is good the art in general is flawed with a bunch of 3D objects being inconsistently used. The characters literal action are sometimes illustrated weird too, they look like some stiff mannequin at some panels.

Anyway we're only at 20sh chapter and theres so much room for improvement so let's hope for that.

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