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The art is good and the story is good, my problem is that the storytelling it's not making the story it's justice. If the storyboard was made a little different, it would value the story better, even more because it's terror/horror. And the abs exposed all the time despite what happened to him just make it feels like what bad terror movies/games do with female characters
I can't take it seriously with the full abs exposed all the time and the random zoom panels of characters doing nothing. Be toxic as you wants, but please have a good storytelling pace
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