Ending was really good

Miyo July 14, 2024 3:30 pm

Ending was really good

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    Chuvia July 27, 2024 2:35 am

    What happens? I dont want to read it but i wanna know

    ivory1008 July 28, 2024 5:02 pm
    What happens? I dont want to read it but i wanna know Chuvia

    (spoiler)



    the first chapter ends by revealing that mc isn’t the father’s real son, but the murderer of his son. they were classmates and mc left his son to die in a fit of bitter jealousy, which he lived to regret. father hated mc all this time despite their idyllic front, and has been plotting revenge all this time—specifically, “how can i make him feel what it’s like to lose someone you love?” and eventually, he concludes that because he himself is the one mc loves most (sexually, romantically and familially), he kills himself in front of mc. story ends with mc being found over father’s dead body, telling the police that he killed his father (in order to “complete the revenge”, out of guilt over killing his real son + devotion to the father)

    Chuvia July 29, 2024 1:24 am
    (spoiler)the first chapter ends by revealing that mc isn’t the father’s real son, but the murderer of his son. they were classmates and mc left his son to die in a fit of bitter jealousy, which he lived to ... ivory1008

    Ohhh! So the father did win at the end, sounds intersting. Thank you for taking your time to tell me!!!!

    ivory1008 July 29, 2024 2:47 am
    Ohhh! So the father did win at the end, sounds intersting. Thank you for taking your time to tell me!!!! Chuvia

    no problem! though technically no one won, because the father seemingly grew to feel for the mc (it’s debatable whether this is sexual or not in nature) and had several moments where he struggled to follow through with his revenge and would eventually back out. but in the end he was too consumed by his self-imposed promise of revenge to be able to reach any other conclusion.