This is will be a probably more better if the author made the story more.... Better? I mean, The characters are nice, our MC and ML are cute, yes, but there'd a lot of plot holes. First of all, the side characters who got powers is just gone? Like the girl who wanted to become first place, They didn't do anything much to her, and didn't appeared anymore. And why did the six gets transported in some kind of parallel universe with no reason at all? And the two character who's also their friend, The blue hair and brown hair (Idk If she's a he...) They didn't really do anything in the story. Especially the oart where pink hair at the end when she vanished, Like!? The silver hair knew she was gonna vanish, but he was like, sorry guys I have an headache, and the pink hair followed him, and everyone was okay with it!? SHE'S GONNA DIE YOU KNOW!? YOI GUYS GONNA LEAVE HER ALONE AND WON'T SPEND TIME WITH HER LAST HOUR?? , the story is rushed, their friendship is lacking, agaim, this would be better if the plot holes were fixed, and the red hair character what's even their purpose??
This is will be a probably more better if the author made the story more.... Better?
I mean, The characters are nice, our MC and ML are cute, yes, but there'd a lot of plot holes. First of all, the side characters who got powers is just gone? Like the girl who wanted to become first place, They didn't do anything much to her, and didn't appeared anymore. And why did the six gets transported in some kind of parallel universe with no reason at all? And the two character who's also their friend, The blue hair and brown hair (Idk If she's a he...) They didn't really do anything in the story. Especially the oart where pink hair at the end when she vanished, Like!? The silver hair knew she was gonna vanish, but he was like, sorry guys I have an headache, and the pink hair followed him, and everyone was okay with it!? SHE'S GONNA DIE YOU KNOW!? YOI GUYS GONNA LEAVE HER ALONE AND WON'T SPEND TIME WITH HER LAST HOUR?? , the story is rushed, their friendship is lacking, agaim, this would be better if the plot holes were fixed, and the red hair character what's even their purpose??