anyway, what i noticed after rereading this was it lacks of pov. if there is any, maybe some readers will easily understand what's happening in every chapter. for me, it feels like it just jump to every scene and then bam! wth is happening why there's a demon blahblah sort of like that. its kinda confusing.
anyway, what i noticed after rereading this was it lacks of pov. if there is any, maybe some readers will easily understand what's happening in every chapter. for me, it feels like it just jump to every scene and then bam! wth is happening why there's a demon blahblah sort of like that. its kinda confusing.