I mean, what's with the uke saying, "I'm not sure if I wanna date you." then the next day he goes "Are you only with me because of sex?" Aren't you contradicting yourself, sir? You don't mind having sex with someone you're not dating but then you get offended when your partner says you're just friends with benefits? Make it make sense!
Also, what's with the seme saying he'll make the uke fall in love with him and then dump him later. But then the next day he goes, "I keep messing things because of old emotions." Like, what?! You want revenge on the uke but the minute you get into a lover's spat you regret making him cry? Dude, make up your mind! Do you wanna hurt him or do you wanna console him? And again, make it make sense!
They're both childish and the flow is just too weird and off for me. I actually thought it had a decent start, just colleagues who used to go to the same elementary school. But no. They had to mess with the plot by inserting the hallucinations of the Seme made of his guilt in their past and his reasoning was just childish. They also made the uke into a naive adult man who keeps assuming things and is often indecisive. I hate that kind of character.
Also, the story has a lot of dramatic scenes that are very, VERY unnecessary. Like with the Seme talking to an imaginary uke who was the epitome of his guilt and anger. Since when did the story turn into a psychological genre? The Uke would also cry so easily, like when the seme said they were just colleagues or like when the Seme confronted him a day later. He just cried, but I thought you didn't wanna date him and you cried just because of that? Give me a break.
Anyways, I'm out. Too bad, it had potential at first and not even halfway in they ruined it.
I mean, what's with the uke saying, "I'm not sure if I wanna date you." then the next day he goes "Are you only with me because of sex?"
Aren't you contradicting yourself, sir? You don't mind having sex with someone you're not dating but then you get offended when your partner says you're just friends with benefits? Make it make sense!
Also, what's with the seme saying he'll make the uke fall in love with him and then dump him later. But then the next day he goes, "I keep messing things because of old emotions."
Like, what?! You want revenge on the uke but the minute you get into a lover's spat you regret making him cry? Dude, make up your mind! Do you wanna hurt him or do you wanna console him?
And again, make it make sense!
They're both childish and the flow is just too weird and off for me. I actually thought it had a decent start, just colleagues who used to go to the same elementary school. But no. They had to mess with the plot by inserting the hallucinations of the Seme made of his guilt in their past and his reasoning was just childish. They also made the uke into a naive adult man who keeps assuming things and is often indecisive. I hate that kind of character.
Also, the story has a lot of dramatic scenes that are very, VERY unnecessary. Like with the Seme talking to an imaginary uke who was the epitome of his guilt and anger. Since when did the story turn into a psychological genre? The Uke would also cry so easily, like when the seme said they were just colleagues or like when the Seme confronted him a day later. He just cried, but I thought you didn't wanna date him and you cried just because of that? Give me a break.
Anyways, I'm out. Too bad, it had potential at first and not even halfway in they ruined it.