Its so funny how u wrote a long ass paragraph what u didnt like and then in the end there are some sentences about things u liked idk i find this funny dkkdkdks like a teacher grading your exam
It's like "yeah your work was trash but don't get discouraged you'll do better next time" lmaoo
I was so upset lol but It's because I actually did like it I guess
Sorry, I only read till the language part... she didn't learn it, she got it with her soul passing throu to this world. So she couldn't even say the language's name, but could still spoke it, like when your hands are good and you can do little stuff with it (like origami and artistic things) but not like you ever learnt it. It's only that she knows it very well.
But it is directly stated that she learnt it because she (og mc) was extremely good at learning languages. So even if the language of the dancers could get explained by what you said, the ancient language of the gods however...
My explanation was meant to explain the knowledge of the god's language... like when she was dead already in her original world but didn't arrive yet to the other world, this know-how got uploaded to her brain or smth
I have a love-hate realtionship with this because of how the MC is written. I kinda really dislike MCs like her (though I don't HATE her, she's just off putting and kind of annoying). That unreachable, not like other girls girl who is good at everything for no explainable reason. Like how tf did she learn the ancient language only 3 people speak? How tf did she learn the language of the dancers? This happened in a span of like 3 months so how could she become trilingual bruh, same with the gun thing, gun fighting shouldn't be "remembered" by her body as *aiming* normally has a role in it, yet I dont think a high schooler in SK should have that much experience, even if OG Raeli did (Which, considering her personnality, she probably didn't). Since she also didn't seem like a great student, as she barely got accepted in a university, it's just so weird to see her magically become a genius at everything. Not only is she perfect at doing everything she wants to do, but she also somehow attracts every single male character in the novel, who are all attracted to her the second they meet her (i guess the grandpa dude would be an exception). And it's so weird how she remembers such minute details of the romance novel she read (since she probably didn't even read it recently, as she was preparing for her college entrance exams). Like who tf remembers staff like the mine thing or the place where the terrorists are and sh*t like that by reading a novel. And who even writes that crap while writing a romance novel entitled Beatrice. It's like she has the perfect timing for remembering the perfect piece of information.
And ofc 90% of the female characters are either in the background so that she doesn't get overshadowed, jealous of her, or complete fools.
I also find it so weird how she killed Beatrice so easily, like, without even thinking much, and had 0 reaction. I get that it was "it's her or me" situation, but she clearly seemed shocked when Vivian died, which would be a normal reaction to have, yet 0 reaction when she literaly KILLED someone. Like wtf??? The logical thing would be performing an exocism or locking her up but no, they KILLED her and had nothing on their conscience afterwards?????? And where is the og beatrice anyway? Did she die? And at the end of the story the writer pulls out and asks her if she wants to LEAVE? Imagine if she said "yes" lmao
Despite this the story isn't bad, the art is great, and I have to admit that the rest of the characters are okay (the King and Adam have my heart). And the romance part was vers well written, compared to other stories of the genre. Though ML didn't have much of a personnality, he wasn't bad neither.
Although I had many criticisms, this still is MUCH better than most of the other stories of the genre.