Anyone else notice how...

Fly King July 12, 2024 7:19 am

Is it just me, or is the content of the chapters getting messier? As in... i can understand what's taking place, but the pacing and flashbacks don't seem to flow very well together... maybe its just me, but it wasn't like this in the early chapters.

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    sheep July 12, 2024 6:16 pm

    doesn’t it seem like they’re in a rush to finish the story? every chapter feels like we’re just going through a checklist of plot points to get to the end.

    after 100 or so chapters i do understand if they’re just not enjoying the process as much anymore.

    Fly King July 12, 2024 11:55 pm
    doesn’t it seem like they’re in a rush to finish the story? every chapter feels like we’re just going through a checklist of plot points to get to the end. after 100 or so chapters i do understand if they... sheep

    Yeahh, thats what it was... we're definitely just glossing through the chapters... unfortunate, but at least theres a novel too(?) (i'm not sure)

    Couch-Potato July 19, 2024 4:23 pm
    Yeahh, thats what it was... we're definitely just glossing through the chapters... unfortunate, but at least theres a novel too(?) (i'm not sure) Fly King

    There is a novel