Even I'm confused where this is going. Author ran out of kinks and threw half assed pet pl...

S-J-M July 11, 2024 2:58 pm

Even I'm confused where this is going. Author ran out of kinks and threw half assed pet play in, but I'm lost on what the lesson is here. Other than jealousy, but that seems pretty petty. Like his whole personality changed.

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    SisterFriede July 11, 2024 3:09 pm

    He's drunk,?

    S-J-M July 11, 2024 3:16 pm
    He's drunk,? SisterFriede

    He's not acting "drunk" though, too well spoken and clear plan of action that he's implementing. Only his personality changed. I mean that could very well be the authors intent though, but it's bad writing if it is lol They're both red flags anyway, I'm just confused

    IDK kun July 11, 2024 5:56 pm
    He's not acting "drunk" though, too well spoken and clear plan of action that he's implementing. Only his personality changed. I mean that could very well be the authors intent though, but it's bad writing if i... S-J-M

    Then it's just poor writing. Author be inserting their kinks, trying to get some validation, which is icky

    S-J-M July 11, 2024 7:27 pm
    Then it's just poor writing. Author be inserting their kinks, trying to get some validation, which is icky IDK kun

    I expected nothing from this story, especially not healthy bdsm after the first few chapters, and am still disappointed lol