I really enjoyed this. The only icky thing is that Kyle is touching Urban against his cons...

ThotChocolate July 10, 2024 6:34 pm

I really enjoyed this. The only icky thing is that Kyle is touching Urban against his consent... But they both obviously like each other, it's just that Urban feels weighed down by his position as a crowned prince which is so understandable. I do think Kyle could've gone a different route because Urban OBVIOUSLY thinks he's a hottie.

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    Izanagi July 12, 2024 5:49 pm

    well, it's normal for a character to have a flaw just to be more realistic.

    ThotChocolate July 13, 2024 1:17 am
    well, it's normal for a character to have a flaw just to be more realistic. Izanagi

    Soooooo being a sex offender is a character flaw? I get it, being pushy or whatever is one thing but he's going a little too far. I know a lot of authors use this as a way to propel a plot forward, I just think it's a bit cliche and blasé to do things like this. Like I said, I still enjoy this as they ARE kind of cute together, it's just exhausting to do the same thing over and over. I just want something new, maybe I have to make a story myself LMAO

    Izanagi July 14, 2024 9:25 am
    Soooooo being a sex offender is a character flaw? I get it, being pushy or whatever is one thing but he's going a little too far. I know a lot of authors use this as a way to propel a plot forward, I just think... ThotChocolate

    well, you know they're already a lover in secret and Urban can push that if he want to and Kyle would stop immediately for sure.

    Also, "Sex Offender" is a heavy word for this.

    ThotChocolate July 14, 2024 3:11 pm
    well, you know they're already a lover in secret and Urban can push that if he want to and Kyle would stop immediately for sure.Also, "Sex Offender" is a heavy word for this. Izanagi

    Of course but at the same time, no matter if you're dating or married or whatever you have a say in your body's autonomy. If you don't give explicit consent, that's not consent at all. Some people take a bit to be okay with more than just kissing or holding hands, everyone moves at their own pace. Kyle moves much quicker than Urban does, and yes it is a sex offender if he keeps touching without explicit consent and doing RISKY moves like "going invisible yet still touching urban in front of people" or not taking "no we can't right now" for an answer.

    Nai July 15, 2024 4:53 am
    Soooooo being a sex offender is a character flaw? I get it, being pushy or whatever is one thing but he's going a little too far. I know a lot of authors use this as a way to propel a plot forward, I just think... ThotChocolate

    Lmao
    You're taking it waaay ouit of proportion