guys, is this goood ? ╥﹏╥ only 7 chapters in but for me, some scenes are kind of awk...

minerva July 10, 2024 7:29 am

guys, is this goood ? ╥﹏╥ only 7 chapters in but for me, some scenes are kind of awkward and does not flow coherently. It is because of the translations? or the world building isn't really that good and messy in some aspects. I think this story has potential tbh

Responses
    Ginvy July 10, 2024 8:57 am

    It’s the plot of story

    Whane July 10, 2024 10:01 am

    READ IT I'LL TELL YOU THIS IS A MASTERPIECE IT ONLY MAKE SENSE AFTER FEW MORE CHAPTER ITS THE PLOT BABE

    minerva July 10, 2024 9:34 pm
    READ IT I'LL TELL YOU THIS IS A MASTERPIECE IT ONLY MAKE SENSE AFTER FEW MORE CHAPTER ITS THE PLOT BABE Whane

    hello again, decided to give it a chance and read until chapter 50. The translations on first 47 chapters are really messy which made me felt confused at the beginning specially there's no build up for plot points to happen . This story is good tho. Good thing I gave it a second chance

    KatieBug July 10, 2024 10:51 pm

    here is your warning, it is very convoluted and really only makes sense if you've binge it. but it's worth it!