Beautiful art, but too much smut, plot kinda lame

Surely July 10, 2024 6:24 am

THE KIDS OMG JAEYEON IS SOOO CUTE AHHH. The art is beautiful

Yknow some stories kinda have situations that feel forced to become smutty and in a love com, this premise and situations set up here feel like that. Still not v sure why TRANSLATING a novel requires so much personal experience... and like why does jaeho needs to come all the way near midnight when public transport wouldve stopped just to check on his bro?? They dk wtf is a video call we living in 1990? And why does he need kangsol to buy meds? Isnt this korea where they have convenience stores everywhr, like my ass about the dudes fever getting worse in that what max 30mins he gna be gone? And even if he wants someone to buy meds why not ask the bro since he alr wanted to come visit?? what rubbish plot. Is so that he cn meet kangsol and they cn have interactions and i hate forced interactions but that being said, they were gna meet at some point anyway i guess and i do like them tgt.

Overall.. too much smut. The austin and ramon was like damn random and nt v necessary if they werent gna talk abt them more. They tried to put in some stuffs abt like communication and shit between couples but r so basic it felt kinda lame to even mention it. Werent anyth tht i was like oooh thts a new perspective just kinda fell flat. Overall could be better but its alright

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