
Maybe it’s the pacing?
Nothing is explained, we’re too quickly thrown from one plot point to another, not allowing any world or character building.
She’s thrown into this new world suddenly, in front of a divine beast no less, and her only thought was “that’s a big dog”
Nothing on why no one knows this divine beast, no questions on why she’s lost, where her parents are.
She showed no big shock that she’s suddenly in a new world, in a child’s body, and took it at face value. That would’ve been a big way to show her as a character and set what her purpose is in this world. Is it to return? Or is she not too happy with her previous life and wants to live here fulfilling some kind of goal or dream.
I mean the most details we’ve gotten so far on our mc current journey is her talking about the food, how it’s different, and how she can make some herself.
No large details in magic, how the guild works, or moments that show off thoughts and intentions of the people around her. Just one dimensional “well protect you talk” to a random cute child they met.
In my opinion it’s a bit half baked
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Im not sure I'm pissed off reading this for no reason or idk what is the reason I feel very irritated , I thought I do enjoy reading this but feels something not right .