2. Their start is definitely a bad start, no one should justify how cute they are now, back when Eli forced Edna on their first night :(
3. The character development was so good. And their backstory is so great, it made my heart race lol.
4. The sudden change on the personality of each knights kinda got me confused. Especially when Chris was all timid, cold, pokered-face guy then he became all playful with Ritrel and other characters like he's always been like that (although it might have been just because they're the best of friends from the very beginning, oh well, they're cute)
5. The ending is rushed, I get that the author might have wanted to lessen the casualties by not letting the war took longer than expected, but it's kinda meh as the reader, it's like trying to start something but failed to finish it justifiably. Was boring :<
6. Well, to be exact, the endings of all the villains are kinda boring, not well thought-out and they are like mindlessly torn out of the story for the sake of happy endings for the main characters.
7. Overall, it's a 4.5/5 experience, despite pointing all these things, it's still one of the best stories I've read. To the point that it makes me want to point them out.
Thoughts on the whole story:
1. First chapter is such a hook <3
2. Their start is definitely a bad start, no one should justify how cute they are now, back when Eli forced Edna on their first night :(
3. The character development was so good. And their backstory is so great, it made my heart race lol.
4. The sudden change on the personality of each knights kinda got me confused. Especially when Chris was all timid, cold, pokered-face guy then he became all playful with Ritrel and other characters like he's always been like that (although it might have been just because they're the best of friends from the very beginning, oh well, they're cute)
5. The ending is rushed, I get that the author might have wanted to lessen the casualties by not letting the war took longer than expected, but it's kinda meh as the reader, it's like trying to start something but failed to finish it justifiably. Was boring :<
6. Well, to be exact, the endings of all the villains are kinda boring, not well thought-out and they are like mindlessly torn out of the story for the sake of happy endings for the main characters.
7. Overall, it's a 4.5/5 experience, despite pointing all these things, it's still one of the best stories I've read. To the point that it makes me want to point them out.