With the abuse escalating as it was and ML being know to murder for fun… we all know within a year or so he’s likely going to kill MC. Probably during sex gone too far. Like there is only 1 way this ends for MC now and it’s with a premature death.
My problem is this was just 7 chapters of watching a guy get tortured. It ends where it began. So you read chapter 1 and you’ve basically gotten the entire experience, which I think is a failure of writing. This isn’t psychological or horror, it’s actual, literal, by definition torture porn. Which fine if that’s your kink, I just think writing wise this was poorly executed and a waste of time.
With the abuse escalating as it was and ML being know to murder for fun… we all know within a year or so he’s likely going to kill MC. Probably during sex gone too far. Like there is only 1 way this ends for MC now and it’s with a premature death.
My problem is this was just 7 chapters of watching a guy get tortured. It ends where it began. So you read chapter 1 and you’ve basically gotten the entire experience, which I think is a failure of writing. This isn’t psychological or horror, it’s actual, literal, by definition torture porn. Which fine if that’s your kink, I just think writing wise this was poorly executed and a waste of time.