I'm on chapter 4, like the premise is so good but it feels so rushed and almost comically ridiculous, it's hard to take it serious and I'm glad the comments I've seen confirmed my reaction. If the story would've been more fleshed out and actually introduced characters properly, I think it could be good. The narration and story telling is the weakest link for sure, kinda sad.
I'm on chapter 4, like the premise is so good but it feels so rushed and almost comically ridiculous, it's hard to take it serious and I'm glad the comments I've seen confirmed my reaction.
If the story would've been more fleshed out and actually introduced characters properly, I think it could be good.
The narration and story telling is the weakest link for sure, kinda sad.