Could have been good

Grey Goo July 7, 2024 4:52 pm

If the FL had an ounce of agency or personality. She doesn’t do anything the entire story except exist and have sex. She gets an incredible power and does nothing with it. Instead of her “writing her own story” it’s used as a quick and easy way to fix the relationship between her and the ML. Like, she didn’t even try to use it that way on her own, it just happened. The only interesting thing she’s ever done was the backstory where she saved ML as a child. But then we see none of that bravery or even quick wit later. Just a let down. She could be replaced with a very sweet pet and nothing but the sex would change.

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