a hot mess

lilacsky13 July 7, 2024 4:29 pm

the plot had a lot of potential, i like the characters design, how everyone is visually very different and the smut scenes were good. but honestly, the storyline was very flat and the worst part is: the mc's are so fucking unpleasant! like really, i couldn't cheer for the couple at all bc all they did was annoy me. the couple is insufferable and i think even the side characters can agree

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    Chick August 27, 2024 3:39 am

    I was thinking the same thing. The entire plot was borish and cliche, and their entire deal was revolved around bad communication. The beginning had a lot of potential, especially as it introduced a lot of different characters and the story line progressed. But then it hit a bump and just kinda sat on it.

    lilacsky13 October 16, 2024 10:51 am
    I was thinking the same thing. The entire plot was borish and cliche, and their entire deal was revolved around bad communication. The beginning had a lot of potential, especially as it introduced a lot of diff... Chick

    exactlyyyy, it ended up being so god damn insufferable! that's what happens when you try to make a manga without being a good writer