i like the 3p in this a lot, the charas are great and love size diff hehe!! i wish dave had more one-on-one time with jinwoo but oh well.
the relationship aside, i feel like this one had a lot of potential to be an interesting zombie apocalypse story, but in the end the writing was kinda...sloppy? it felt a bit directionless at times, since there was no greater goal being worked towards besides survival. and if its going to be about survival and human persistence, or sacrificing your morals, then it should rlly highlight that! there was even that whole aspect of jinwoo being immune to zombies (!!), but then that didn't rlly go anywhere besides a convenient way to keep him in the game?
and if this wants to be a more character narrative driven story rather than plot driven, it needed to go deeper into who our 3 mcs are, rather than explaining in the A/N. the charas felt a bit 2 dimensional bc of that. the poor tl also didn't help in a lot of these aspects lol
i rlly felt like this had potential which is why i feel a bit disappointed. but i do like the 3p a lot and the art is tasty
i like the 3p in this a lot, the charas are great and love size diff hehe!! i wish dave had more one-on-one time with jinwoo but oh well.
the relationship aside, i feel like this one had a lot of potential to be an interesting zombie apocalypse story, but in the end the writing was kinda...sloppy? it felt a bit directionless at times, since there was no greater goal being worked towards besides survival. and if its going to be about survival and human persistence, or sacrificing your morals, then it should rlly highlight that! there was even that whole aspect of jinwoo being immune to zombies (!!), but then that didn't rlly go anywhere besides a convenient way to keep him in the game?
and if this wants to be a more character narrative driven story rather than plot driven, it needed to go deeper into who our 3 mcs are, rather than explaining in the A/N. the charas felt a bit 2 dimensional bc of that. the poor tl also didn't help in a lot of these aspects lol
i rlly felt like this had potential which is why i feel a bit disappointed. but i do like the 3p a lot and the art is tasty