Chapter 1 was so interesting, and makes it seem like the FL would be proactive in trying to change her fate and ditch the neglectful ML.
Thats what the story's about, right?? WRONG
The FL's thoughts say she's going to ignore the shitty ML and not follow the same fate, but her actions are so lukewarm and mediocre. She gives in constantly, and continues to do everything ML tells her to. And he even smirks as she behaves so.
The story tries to paint ML like a psycho, but the art and plot is so dull, he just looks so stiff, aloof and nonchalant. And since his character is so dull, the FL comes off dull and simple as well.
ML: come with me FL: (whole internal dialogue about how she doesn't want to go, asks he should go by himself. ML never loved Leah. She won't be foolish like the OG Leah, she won't end up being jailed and executed. **But omg ML looks handsome. He's the most handsome. If only he wasn't "psycho". What do I do? I'll just have to be more psycho than him!**) ML: Didnt you hear me? ...I said come with me FL: (omg is he staring at me? I wonder why...) Okay, here I come ML: *smirks at her obedience*
Chapter 1 was so interesting, and makes it seem like the FL would be proactive in trying to change her fate and ditch the neglectful ML.
Thats what the story's about, right?? WRONG
The FL's thoughts say she's going to ignore the shitty ML and not follow the same fate, but her actions are so lukewarm and mediocre. She gives in constantly, and continues to do everything ML tells her to. And he even smirks as she behaves so.
The story tries to paint ML like a psycho, but the art and plot is so dull, he just looks so stiff, aloof and nonchalant. And since his character is so dull, the FL comes off dull and simple as well.
ML: come with me
FL: (whole internal dialogue about how she doesn't want to go, asks he should go by himself. ML never loved Leah. She won't be foolish like the OG Leah, she won't end up being jailed and executed. **But omg ML looks handsome. He's the most handsome. If only he wasn't "psycho". What do I do? I'll just have to be more psycho than him!**)
ML: Didnt you hear me? ...I said come with me
FL: (omg is he staring at me? I wonder why...) Okay, here I come
ML: *smirks at her obedience*
GIRL, Bye