I can't read this with straight face what's wrong with them😭 all of them are f up. The...

Vienthy July 6, 2024 5:20 pm

I can't read this with straight face what's wrong with them all of them are f up.

The lines, some bg story, and truthfully the plot itself is childish... It's resembles the story I wrote when I was elementary the only difference is of course,(mine was more childish which is excused...I was a child ) BUT THIS?? GOD If you have that loving family and power why would you even think you're "powerless" against a "protagonist" who's obviously an airhead( EVERYTHING SHE SPITS CAN LITERALLY BACKFIRE TO HER IF I WAS THE MC I WOULD HUMILIATE HE ETO DEATH)

btw the artstyle is kinda weird... ? The side profile obviously looks okay but some panels their face looks pointy and too symmetrical(eyes are sometimes too close) but sometimes the art improves?? (Only the fl tho) LIKE THAT BLACK FITTED DRESS WITH A MASK WAS FIRE She was gorgeous. Anyways that's all.

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