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SO GLAD I FOUND MY PEOPLE, I really appreciate some got fantasy but the whole story just feels like a made-up story by a 13-year old who can’t catch sleep (and cant tell how a buildup and logical storytelling should go). Like a ‘ohh what if I add this oh and what if he had this and this’, babe u can better chose a simple storyline and execute it properly especially if your new to it.
The most unrealistic part of this might be that the guy is chronically ill, has the longcapacity of a literal peanut (you mean to tell me you can’t walk for 10 minutes, shower alone etc) but u can do it 6 times in a row while making out the entire time? And he can get wet? How many freaky shit can a body have? Pick a struggle. Don’t get me wrong I love a good omegaverse but this type of stories just piss me off, either make it real life or make it a alternative universe.
Also why is he so mean to Minhyuk all of a sudden after making a bf? I would be pissed if the guy I had been friends been for years would treat me like a second option after knowing someone for FOUR DAYS.