also kinda annoyed at how the romance is written out cuz it feels like her iq goes down to 10 whenever he's around.....
Yes yes
i didn't notice that it got cut off but the rest of my main point is:
(random time jumps aside ) you could miss almost nothing. I'm not sure if I'm making sense but like I'd like thus better if it showed the impact before and after the problems are resolved. Instead of saying "the citizens are suffering cause of your drugs" show how bad it is. I hope I'm making sense but it just feels like even though things are happening, there isn't anything actually happening
I don't like how this is written tbh. It feels like the story goes "here's this thing that must be stopped but omg look at that a chapter later it's resolved" type thing. It lacks tension so it just feels like things are happening but it doesn't matter whether you pay attention or not. Like you could skip like 10 chapters and (random time jumps aside