The author is just not good at writing something this complex. The whole alpha and omega ...

Kyuu July 5, 2024 5:27 pm

The author is just not good at writing something this complex.

The whole alpha and omega literally cannot control themselves because pheromones and how that affects everyone that they care about is a very good concept to explore.
But this author is just not skilled enough to convey that story, and it’s a shame too cause it’s a good premise if explored properly.

If this was better written people would not hate it as much is my point. It’s not so much the premise, it’s the quality of writing.

Responses
    Vampslay July 5, 2024 5:47 pm

    This. for me i wanna know how things are gonna change between omega and beta.there will be no revenge I wanna know why did omega choose alpha at the end did the omega ever felt guilty towards beta ?? Was his love for alpha more than his son ??how he gonna treat his new child ? Will he be a good mother?how beta gonna feel about this??For me alpha and omega relationship was basically lust ( i remember he said he would never be with a omega ) then how things changed so much so much to explore with this topic .like you said author is literally not good at writing

    Kyuu July 6, 2024 6:05 am
    This. for me i wanna know how things are gonna change between omega and beta.there will be no revenge I wanna know why did omega choose alpha at the end did the omega ever felt guilty towards beta ?? Was his lo... Vampslay

    Yeah we’re missing guilt and introspection fr
    Everything you said, we’re probably never gonna get, and it hurts cause the author had the idea for a very good story.

    We could have had it all