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well shit July 4, 2024 5:04 am

I see the vision the author wants to make but the execution in characters and world building is just not it lol Characters like jia and raosa(?) make the atmosphere of the story so damn jarring bc are we seeing the same bloodshed rn or no? To have these ideals in this kind of world building is funny to say the least. And the twins saying they didnt kill anyone before the cute harajuku-core hero arrived, thats a damn lie didnt they just stabbed a woman for being “good” to send her to heaven lol ?

Author put us right into a story where it felt like its already reaching a climax all from ch1 until now and had no room to give us a sense of attachment to these characters so i kind of dont really care what happens to the characters including the mc. Bc of that it feels extremely dragged out. The villains are annoying and their reasonings are incredibly edgy and cliche, the government and the whole equality group ideal is incredibly stupid for putting all those villains in one big confinement cell instead of putting them down immediately. Why make them wait for their sentencing? For fear of wrongful conviction? But isnt that solved already bc of jia’s abilities to avoid it? Everything just feels so inconsistent and naive, i wonder if thats the author’s intention lol if so then thats great

Massive kudos to the artist for the character design though bc its very stunning! Gorgeous art style and colours! I hope mc kills everyone. Be the villain even! Go big! Go apeshit! Who cares at this point im just here to see the mc beat ass (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

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    gumi July 5, 2024 1:46 am

    well actually the woman stabbed by the children is still alive and was just under their ability, it was shown that when they turn off their abilities those under their powers comes back normal