So right away, let’s get talk about the elephant in the room, that’s the touching fl in her sleep. I’m pretty sure that this author has a thing cnc thing since some of there other works involve it, (stuff like when the fl says no but really means yes? I’m terrible at explaining things. So it would also include liking being touched while asleep). I don’t really believe that creators of this is a male like someone said in the comments, sometimes people have certain kinks regardless of their gender. Take a look at what dark romance is on booktok as an example. As someone who’s polyamorous, this was ok, not great, but also not the worst thing I’ve read, just ok. The chemistry between both men and fl just don’t feel genuine. Seems like the guys liked her because she’s pretty and they knew her when was they were young. Same goes for the fl, wish there could’ve been more of a development. Even the brother was hardly there . Idk about anyone else but I would be livid if I found out my two friends were trying to get with my sibling. Smut was alright when you take into consideration that this could be the artist kinks (allegedly lol, because I’m not 100% sure, it’s just a speculation) Threesomes was good lol idk what else to say about it. The ending was rushed for sure tho lol, though what can we expect from 20 chapters?
So right away, let’s get talk about the elephant in the room, that’s the touching fl in her sleep. I’m pretty sure that this author has a thing cnc thing since some of there other works involve it, (stuff like when the fl says no but really means yes? I’m terrible at explaining things. So it would also include liking being touched while asleep).
I don’t really believe that creators of this is a male like someone said in the comments, sometimes people have certain kinks regardless of their gender. Take a look at what dark romance is on booktok as an example.
As someone who’s polyamorous, this was ok, not great, but also not the worst thing I’ve read, just ok. The chemistry between both men and fl just don’t feel genuine. Seems like the guys liked her because she’s pretty and they knew her when was they were young. Same goes for the fl, wish there could’ve been more of a development. Even the brother was hardly there . Idk about anyone else but I would be livid if I found out my two friends were trying to get with my sibling.
Smut was alright when you take into consideration that this could be the artist kinks (allegedly lol, because I’m not 100% sure, it’s just a speculation) Threesomes was good lol idk what else to say about it.
The ending was rushed for sure tho lol, though what can we expect from 20 chapters?