I hope it’s not over!

The chapter is marked as the end but I hope it’s not over as some things still need to be solved (like the ID thief, and her friend walking again for example). Overall the resolving of the last situation (getting into the void etc) felt very rushed? I don’t know if it’s just me but I almost had a hard time following the last chapter because they went really fast and skipped from one panel to another. It feels weird when suddenly the plot is getting so fast when the rest was not paced like that at all. I really like Dawn’s personality, because I find it refreshing. Personally I could never act that way, but it really feels honorable, and kind of adorable to be honest. I’ve rooted for her to get with Chasel from the start, as you could immediately see their dynamics play out, the way they’re pretty much opposite and in the end Dawn helps Chasel to get out from his bubble of loneliness, responsibility and burden. They look really cute together, and I want a kiss! Or at least some dates and some feelings confession please!
Percy was kind of annoying at the start, even if you get to comprehend more of her afterward and she gets better. But like Dawn didn’t even choose her teacher, it’s like day 2 she’s been bullied 3468 times already and now there’s that woman who comes around and attacks her with magic … when she literally just arrived and DONT know magic like what is wrong with you lady? I don’t really like the “couple” she forms with the teacher, because although he’s probably not much older than her, there’s something that irks me about it.
I liked the design of Coal, even if honestly I liked the drawings in general, and I liked his personality, the way he could bicker with Dawn, which installed a lot of familiarity between them but with this vibe I kind of felt like it wouldn’t go much further than that. In the eyes of Dawn it was really a friendship and they kinda gave me siblings vibes when they bickered, which was funny nonetheless.
Overall, the universe is really great and I’m happy with it but I want more. I feel like it’s not properly exploited? There’s a lot of potential to it still and it’s lacking some proper expansion. 65 chapters is way too short, we need at least 100 for the narrative to be properly placed. Honestly around chapter 55 I felt like it would never be the end in ten chapters? It seemed impossible because of where we were at that time in the story. The resolution isn’t the best with the mysteries left. The story rushed toward the 40s/50s last chapters? When the pace before was great, which is a shame. Still liked it though!