Idk man so far the author doesnt have some strong character-building in her work and her previous work. She just used the same format and pace with all of her works (weak ass bottom x sadistic rough soon to be good boy top) so im not really looking forward to kim dan's character building tbh. So far the plot also is going nowhere (and its not kind of slowburn type imo). tho its just my point of view.
He couldn't even have a brain to ask for documents about their deals, doesn't know how much pay he got after servicing Jaekyung sexually and as his physical therapist. He just accept and spread his legs without knowing the $ to pay his own debt to jaek, kim dan is a man almost in his 30 yet the author wrote him as if he's a living sex toy with no rational brain
Please don't talk bad about my baby Kim Dan, Beacuse in DJ Alex, dongyun (idk if I spelled that correct) made up his mind to not chase Alex, and he also had a character development.
So I think that jinx will have a better outcome. Also the asshole horse is obviously in his chasing arc, AND character development so stop bitching in the comment section
Mingwa is just good at making porn, her story's plot is always like a dark romance writer in wattpad who just hit puberty. And I'm not bitching, kim dan is written like an idiot teenage girl despite being almost 30 years OLD MAN. He could take advantage of the deal yet he just spread his legs to that arrogant incel-like horse, he didn't ask HOW MUCH MONEY he made after going thru that violent sex.
Thank you for praising how mingwa makes exceptional smut.
But please are you even reading the story? Cuz if you are, maybe you have Dyslexia. Kim Dan had a hard childhood, and has to take care of her grandmother!
I agree that the horse-face fucks him violently, but how could Kim Dan think to take more advantage of him? He has a house to live in safely without gangsters beating the shit out of him, he eats and does not have MORE bills to pay.
His job as a physical therapist and him being a "sex toy" are payed separately, which are huge bucks. And have you not a brain?
That man is too tired, both mentally and physically, to be acting like a 30 year old man.
bb Kim Dan is living a hard life and you bitch about him acting like an " idiot teenage girl "
I'm reading the story, that's why i said kim dan is behaving like a teenage girl. Mingwa's writing has so many plot hole. If kim dan were a girl this manhwa will have more hate bc of mingwa's cringe writing
Also it's always funny when people say "dont read if you dont like" like how can I tell how the story's plot work if i dont read it???? Weird ahh opinion, if I don't read it then I cant pick the cringe shits from this manhwa twink idiot 30 y.o with shrimp brain bottom
Well to me it seems like you aren't. If you are unsatisfied when how it's written, them maybe politely mention it, and not outright be insulting. Writer's have a hard time improving their works and do need some assisting.
And like I said, if you don't like it then stop reading it. If you had enough of the story's plot then do bother to read it anymore.
Your words are offending and unpleasant to the people reading it.
And I'm sorry for calling you dyslexic.
Ah thanks god its euihyun and not kim fuckin dan ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ my bby is not weak and can stand up for himself unlike some twink in despair lol