liked it but no explanations for mc's teleportation power? also i dont think i skipped a c...

Jechk July 2, 2024 4:05 pm

liked it but no explanations for mc's teleportation power? also i dont think i skipped a chapter, but what happened to that guy that was hitting on mc bc he was going to inherit everything? i dont think the guy that kidnapped ml was also shown, and that whole thing of making him fall was wrapped up too quickly when he was kinda built up to be this big boss the main characters have to face (and everything after that are just mini conflicts). i feel like author forgot what they envisioned the story to be at first. backstory focused mainly on ml and then they just forgot mc.

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