I feel like the story strives to be mysterious but executes it awfully. At over 70 chapter...

Nobody in Particular v3 July 2, 2024 5:53 am

I feel like the story strives to be mysterious but executes it awfully. At over 70 chapters, the story and character motives is still very unclear. The MC’s confidence depleted as the story progressed. Despite how strong she is, she is completely helpless and constantly at the mercy of other people. I feel like I got catfished by the initial premise, lol. Not the most satisfied with where the story is headed but it’s too late to drop

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    somnia July 8, 2024 9:18 pm

    I think it's obvious from the title alone that this is nothing but a power fantasy for little girls. FL has Mary Sue ingraved in her genes and it shows. Nothing in this story exists for any other reason besides make FL look both epic and elegantly uwu at the same time.