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Oh, and forgot to mention his never ending "good-for-nothing" nickname, even though he did what he did those first 30-40 chaps and apparently "rumors travel fast" only when it comes to that 1/100 bad thing it ended up happening related to him
1. It's been like 4 years since that red merchant girl saw this guy and for the longest time can't possibly fanthom the idea that he changed and it's so annoying
2. That teacher wanted to make a moment about his backstory but it felt so out of place and forced, just who's supposed to even fell bad for him? Mostly because of the pacing and awful storytelling
3. That skill of his, "acting genius" or whatever, tries so hard to be like "forth wall" from ORV and it shows. Unfortunately, if it was nonexistent I feel like it wouldn't change the sorry one bit. Literally a pointless addition to make the plot a little special
4. Bro why are there so many girls? I only see that boy with the black magic to even interact a little more with MC. Other than that, only "powerful girls"
5. Nox said randomly "the protag doesn't exist" a couple of times and refused to elaborate on that one. Yo. I thought that something as important as this would be given at least 3 panels in a chap but nah, nothing.
6. After having that supreme revelation that the protag doesn't exist why did he keep his bad personality? Did he fuse with it or smth cuz he said at first that he doesn't enjoy doing this, but I see that he doesn't have a problem with it now.
7. That servant from the red merchant, if he's so evil and his stats are so bad, why not just... Get rid of him? if you're saying he is GOING to be, not IS, an absolutely villain later on?
8. That bad organization of his, along with the grand plan of copying himself resembles the plot from "the novel's extra". At this point it feels like a fan fiction of some sort with things taken from popular stories and forcefully inserted into the plot, even though they don't make sense together.
Think i'd find a lot more if I'd take my time to nitpick but these are what stood out for me and I'm only at chap 57.
Anyway, good story to kill time. Not the best, obviously, but as long as you don't think too much you'll be able to enjoy it, at least for the art.