I want to like this, I like atypical omegaverse stories, but the characters talk each other in circles and especially in smut scenes it completely kills the atmosphere. Like they got to the bed then spent 3 chapters talking and handwringing, the pacing is all over.
I want to like this, I like atypical omegaverse stories, but the characters talk each other in circles and especially in smut scenes it completely kills the atmosphere. Like they got to the bed then spent 3 chapters talking and handwringing, the pacing is all over.